Friday, September 12, 2008

LOTS of chapters!

I've decided. I'm going to make twenty-two chapters for my story Life on a Ship. Is that to many? Tell me if you want twenty-two chapters in the comments section. I keep having great ideas for the story!

The tooth fairy IS real!

I can prove that the tooth fairy is real. When I woke up one morning and saw my tooth wasn't gone, I got up to watch TV. I watched the doors, but my mom or dad didn't go in. When I went back in the bedroom, four quarters were there and my tooth was gone! She really IS real!

Story 4: Life on a ship-Chapter 11:Talking parrots

After lunch, Isabelle, Jack, and Diana went for a walk on the island. They played lots of games on their way around the island. They skipped stones, climbed trees, and even talked to some talking parrots. The talking parrots were very interesting. The parrots told them about the pirates that lived on island and about the treasure they buried."We found some of that treasure, Mr.Parrot,"Jack said."Good for you!"the parrot squawked."We haven't opened it yet,"Diana said."I heard that there was a queen back in the pirate times. The pirates stole her beautiful gold locket. I believe it's in that treasure chest you have,"the parrot said."Wow,"Faith said."REALLY wow,"said Isabelle."Will you be our pet, Mr.parrot?"Diana asked."Sure,"the parrot said,"But I'm a girl."It sure was a beautiful parrot."Do you like the name Rainbow?"Diana asked."It's the perfect name for me,"the parrot said. They put their new pet on a perch in the treehouse.

Story 4: Life on a ship-Chapter ten: Faith's surprise

Jack and Diana loved the treehouse. So did Isabelle. They all went in to go see if Faith was awake. It was 9:00 so they thought she would be awake. To their surprise, Faith was getting her cereal and orange juice! After they all had breakfast, they went outside."We have a surprise for you, Faith,"Jack said."A surprise? Where?"Faith asked. They all ran over to the big tree to show Faith the treehouse."There it is, Faith,"said Diana. Faith looked up."WOW!"Faith said. They all played in the treehouse until lunch time.

Thursday, September 11, 2008

Story 4: Life on a ship-Chapter nine: Treehouse

Jack and Diana were bored. Isabelle stopped reading."How about we go find something to do on the island?"Isabelle asked."Sure,"said Jack. Faith was sleeping in. She usually woke up at 7:00. It was 7:45. They got out of the boat. The island was always peaceful and it always cheered Diana up. Isabelle walked up to a big palm tree. It had low, steady branches that didn't even move in the wind. Jack had an idea."How about we make a treehouse?"Jack asked."Sure!"said Diana. They gathered wood and stuffed their arms up with as much as they could carry. They piled all the wood in front of the palm tree."I think that's enough,"said Isabelle. Diana got their dad's old toolbox and they all got to work. Isabelle put the wood in place, Diana put in the screws and nails and Jack hammered. When they were done, they got in their new treehouse. It was wonderful.

Check out the new blog!

Bubber and Owa's blog is finally on my Blogroll(now I know the proper name.Yay me!)! Check it out! It's really cool. Owa even has her own story! I bet you'll like it!

Do you like my new story?

Isn't my new story Life On a Ship SO COOL? I'll keep it coming. Does fourteen chapters sound like enough? Tell me how many chapters you want in the comments section. Fourteen sounds like enough, right?