Monday, June 16, 2008

Story 4- Living on a ship: Chapter 1- The crash

(Based on my adventure with Jack and Diana in the pool. This first chapter we didn't pretend).

Chapter 1- The crash
"It sure is foggy out," said dad. "I can't even read!" said Isabelle. "I hope we don't crash into one of those big rocks!" said Jack. "Don't worry, son. I'm sure I'll never crash," said dad,"Almost." "What did you say, daddy?" asked Diana. "Nothing. Nothing at all,"said dad. "Watch out for that rock!!!" all the kids yelled. There was a huge HUGE rock in front of them. Dad didn't hear their screams because at the very same moment they screamed, there was a big rumble- thunder. Cccccrrraaassh! They hit the rock. They screamed. They were alive. God protected them. "MOM!!!!!! DAD!!!!!!" yelled Jack. "Come here!!!!!" yelled Diana. "They're dead!!!!!!" Said Isabelle. Diana, Isabelle and Jack started to cry. Now they were left to protect themselves.

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